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I’ve loved you for almost a minute.

I approached you
But you just turned to talk to her.
A second later you were through
With her and life.
I talked you out of your slow suicide,
After that I never got a ‘thank you’
I think you just wanted to go and hide.
An hour later you came and showed me your cuts
And I fixed them right up.
You stayed for awhile
But left with a grin.
A day later you came and said
‘I’ve loved you from the first minute I saw you
But I’m ending this life
With a simple kitchen knife.’
I couldn’t do much
You didn’t even listen the first time
So why should I give it a second try.
So you took the knife and slit away,
I stood there watching with tears flowing down me face.
You left without a trace,
And it’s only a year later and I’ve already forgotten your face.

So the moral of this tale
Is never even try the first time, there just going to leave you anyway.
:iconimworseatwhatidobest:

Author's Comments

Ok this one is really weird, it doesn't even make sense. Anywayz don't take the little moral thing at the bottom literally(I don't beliave that, it just went with the little story thing)

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:iconfrozenfears:
Powerful... wow.

"So the moral of this tale
Is never even try the first time, there just going to leave you anyway."


I really like that part.

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Mi-amintesc de ochii tai. <3

( And I remember your eyes... )
:iconimworseatwhatidobest:
^_^ Thank you

--
Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it.
:iconbloodyangelus:
dont do the moral thing

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<<BlOoDy AnGeLuS>> *HeLl Is ReAl *
:iconimworseatwhatidobest:
uhh........ok

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Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it.

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